This story is about a green planet. In this planet everything is green. One girl called Zoe lived with her green family in this beautiful and green planet. She had a green and big cat called Marshall.
The people lived happily and quietly in this green planet.
One day a red family appeared succesfully and happily.They arrived in a red spaceship and the people went down in the big park. A father a mother and their daughter.The daugter was called Maho, she went to the school. In the classroom Zoe and Maho became friends quickly . In the school a boy told a joke to Maho, but she didn´t like the joke and she answered angrily.After the school Maho and Zoe went to the park quickly and Maho saw that in this planet everything was green. She was amazed, because in her planet everything was red. Then they went to Zoe´s house, Maho was sad, because her parents missed their red planet. Maho gave her red bear sadly to Zoe. The red family came back to their red planet by their spaceship. This night Zoe dreamed that she travelled to the colorful galaxy. She was visiting each planet.
Excellente work, girls! The story is clear to understand and the sentences are complex and ambitious
ReplyDeleteCongratulations!