Monday, May 23, 2011

The greenest and cutest history

THE GREENEST AND CUTEST HISTORY

Zoe lived in a green planet with green trees and green houses.

Zoe lived wit her green family and with her green cat whose name was Marshall.
One day they saw a red spaceship. From the red spaceship a red family got down.           
They lived in a green house. Maho was the daughter from the red family.
Maho went to school and she became friends quickly with zoe. The green students discriminated Maho.
Maho  was sad.
Maho's father decided to return to their planet because they missed their planet.
Maho brought a teddy bear fore.
This night gave zoe dream happily with a spaceship with she going to travel to all the colorful galaxy

1 comment:

  1. Good work! The sentences are a bit choppy but they are grammatically correct and easy to understand
    Next time you can try something a bit more demanding

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