Monday, May 23, 2011

Alma


Once upon a time a little girl called Alma.She was walking happily along the street .
It was snowing and Alma wrote her name in the blackboard in front of the toy shop where she saw a toy. The toy was very similar to Alma. She wanted to came inside but the door was closed. She hit angrily the door with a snowball and the door opened. She entered to the toy shop. When she wanted to take the toy  another toy hit her leg and she put up the toy. The toy was a boy with a bike. He was riding a bike fast and wanted to escape from the toy shop, because he is a prisoner, but the door closed. Alma climbing the shelf but when she touched a toy she  became a toy.

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1 comment:

  1. Good work! The summary is a bit short but it is Ok in general. There are practically no mistakes
    Well done!

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