
Alma was walking and jumping along the road. It Was snowing. She was a very sweet person, She had green trousers, a shirt, a pink waistcoat, a blue hat, a red scarf and white gloves.
Suddenly, she stopped in front of the wall and she wrote her name on it. In the wall there was a lot of names. When she turned around she saw a windowshop with a doll that had the same clothes. When she looked her clothes she saw again the windowshop and the doll was gone. Excitedly she tried to open the door but she couldn't open it.
Suddenly she took angrily a snowball and she threw it to the door and she was gone. Then the door opened alone and she came into the toyshop happily. She saw the shop and suddenly she crashed a toy on a bike, the kid was riding in a bike. When she look again to the table the girl was not there and she looked all the shop and she found it. She was on a shelf. When she tried to take the doll, she took off a glove. When she touched she became the doll. Then in the windowshop appared an other doll.
Suddenly she took angrily a snowball and she threw it to the door and she was gone. Then the door opened alone and she came into the toyshop happily. She saw the shop and suddenly she crashed a toy on a bike, the kid was riding in a bike. When she look again to the table the girl was not there and she looked all the shop and she found it. She was on a shelf. When she tried to take the doll, she took off a glove. When she touched she became the doll. Then in the windowshop appared an other doll.
The end
Maga Evangelisti-Joaco Avalos-Pili Ledesma-Marcos Demichelis
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ReplyDeleteExcellent work, kids! You used the strutures and vocablulary thorougly. The mistakes are minor and they don't impede undertanding
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